The boss calls pierce and asks about if they know anything about where kinzzie is. Peirce immediately responds in a serious tone “get to crib we got a problem” the boss asks “what’s going on?” Peirce then says “just get here as fast as you can”. The boss races back to the HQ, when he gets in he sees the crew gathered around the TV watching live feed from a breaking news report. Peirce turns to the boss and says “we found him.” The boss looks to the TV to see Dex driving a white truck, the reporter goes on to say that and unidentified female has been taken hostage by Dex who is driving about 20 MPH with several police cars following him the same speed, Dex has threatened to kill the hostage (kinzzie) if the police get any closer. The rest of the crew watching the TV turn to the boss, pierce asks “what do you want us to do boss”? the boss pauses for a moment staring at the TV and says “Pierce get the chopper ready, Gat you and the crew…..” Gat cuts off the boss saying “you don’t even have to say it” the boss says “alright we gota move fast lets go” (end scene)(the plan is for the boss and pierce to go up by helicopter and skydive to the truck that dex is in. the rest of the crew will drive in between dex’s truck sand the police blocking off the police from the boss and dex.)On the way to the situation the crew on the ground run into some problems with the police (a road block) and the boss assists them with a sniper rifle from the helicopter. After the roadblock pierce notices a few helicopters in the distance (FBI and police) pierce says that they should take out the helicopters to make sure they don’t get in the way. The boss must use a heavy machine gun to take out 3 helicopters in the area before proceeding with the plan. Once the crew is in place and the helicopters are cleared pierce takes the helicopter high above the road that Dex is on (ahead of dex) and the boss skydives towards the truck, the boss must parachute through the passenger side window. As the boss descends the rest of the crew cuts off the police following dex, and distracts them so the boss can descend with no interruption. The boss parachutes through the passenger side window of the truck smashing the glass and landing in the passenger seat. Dex is caught completely off guard, the boss starts to wrestle the gun out of dex’s hand. During the struggle the gun goes off twice into the roof and Dex loses control of the truck. The truck crashes outside a massive parking garage in the middle of the city. After the crash Dex runs into the parking garage attempting to hide. The boss attempts to free himself from the wreckage, once he has freed himself he looks into the back to see if kinzzie is alright. Kinzzie is a bit shaken up but she says “I am ok just get him, I can take care of myself” the boss gets out of the truck and heads into the parking garage after Dex. STAG shows up (now under the temporary control of the FBI) and surrounds the garage and starts to drop of troops on the roof. The boss now fight his way through STAG solders swarming the building, they come in through the entrance, the roof and rappel down the sides of the building. The boss must fight his way through 4 levels of the garage, once he has cleared the fourth level the garage becomes eerily quit. The boss yells out “Dex, come on out and quiet acting like a b***h” “Dex replies from somewhere in the garage “(laughter) you amuse me so much, but I think it’s time to end this”. Then a car near the boss explodes almost killing the boss. The boss gets up and yells “that’s so typical of you Dex, can’t even kill a man while looking at him!” the boss continues to search, then a grenade rolls out in front of the boss and the boss must dive out of the way to avoid it. When the boss avoids it he yells out “seriously! There is no way out Dex just come out so we can finish this”. Dex yells back “if you insist”. Dex appears behind the boss and starts to shoot at the boss. The boss must defeat dex in a gunfight(boss fight), dex hides behind a car on the other side of the garage firing a the boss with a sub machine gun. (if the boss tries to get too close to dex ,dex will throw a grenade(that goes off quickly) at him. )The boss must shoot dex when he comes out from cover. When dex takes a considerable amount of damage he throws a flash bang (blinding the boss) and hides in another part of the garage (same level of the garage). This goes on for 4 times, and then Dex is defeated. (Cut scene) Dex is on the ground wounded, the boss approaches him with a handgun. The boss points it at dex and says “I want to know why. We had everything in Stillwater, we won and then you and Julies threw it out the window. Why?” Dex smirks and say “f**k you, you are going to kill me anyway.” The boss shoots dex in the leg (dex yells in pain), and says “how fast you die is up to me”. Dex says chuckling “you really are that stupid, money! You think I wanted to stay in that s**thole any longer then I needed too. How long did you think we were going to last. When the saints took over Stillwater, it was only a matter of time before people started to turn on each other for more power or the cops would bring us down. You think people in these gangs give a s***t about loyalty or respect, no, as soon as they see an opportunity to get more power they take it. It won’t be long before your own turn on you because they want more power. The boss replies “No they won’t, because unlike jullies I treat my own right, I don’t throw them out like trash when I am done with them. And I respect them, something you never knew anything about”. Dex laughs to himself and says “oh yea you love your crew and they love you (sarcastically), that’s why let Lin drown in the bottom of the ocean so you could save your own ass” the boss says “you son of a b***h” and shoots dex several times until the clip is empty. The boss then pulls the gun down and stares at the body for a few seconds, then gat drives up and gets out of his car. gat walks up next to the boss and looks down at dex’s body and says “I knew there wasn’t something right him, could have at least waited so I could have gotten a few shoots in. come on we got to get out of here before more cops show up”. The boss gets into the car with gat and leave (endmission)
The boss walks into the living room area where a modal of the suspected hideout of the leader of the morning star is on a table. Sergei is standing over it with a pointer, he is in serous mode. The boss asks “ok Sergei what do you got for us” Sergei begins to explain the plan as the rest of the crew gathers around while their loading weapons. Sergei explains that the plan is to hijack a construction truck that goes in and out of the complex and the boss and Sergei will use it as a Trojan horse to get in, once in the boss and Sergei will open the gate to let the main force in, once in the boss and Sergei will open the main door (which needs the key code) while the rest of the crew covers them, and Pierce is assigned to crawl through the sewer system to get in to cut off nay escape route. Peirce immediately objects to his role saying “sewer! Are you F**king serous why do I get all the s**ty jobs” the boss responds “look pierce I don’t have time for this, just get this done with any there won’t be any more s***y jobs. You have an important role, I am not letting this a**hole get away”. Peirce says “damn it I am going to have to buy new clothes after this”. Sergei explains that once the door is open viola and some other saints will stay outside to protect the rear, once the plan is executed there should be no way out to escape. The boss agrees with the plan and sets out with Sergei to complete the first part of the plan. (end scene) the boss and Sergei head out to intercept the truck, on the way Sergei is anxious to payback the leader of the morning star and goes on to says that he has been waiting a long times for this and goes on to tell the boss “you know when I first agreed to help you I did not think we would ever get close to bringing down the morning star, but guess you proved me wrong. You and your friends have been good to me and I am unsure if I can ever repay you and your friends what you have all done for me. If I had not run into you I would probably be face down in a gutter” the boss replies “no problem Sergei, but let’s get this s**t done first before you start telling me how awesome I am ”. The boss and Sergei find the truck and jack it. Once they have the truck the boss calls kinzzie to ask how everyone else is doing. Kinzzie says “everyone is in position except for pierce, I have not heard from pierce yet. Ohh wait he is calling now stay on the line.” Pierce says “okay I am in the sewer, goddam it I can barely breathe how long is this tunnel.” Kinzzie says “it’s about 120 yards” pierce responds “well f**k me. What did I do to ….(then pierce starts screaming) the boss says in a concerned voice “Pierce! What’s going on?!” Noises of a struggle can be heard then pierce picks up the phone again and says “it’s nothing, just a rat. I think I need a rabies shoot after this” the boss says “just keep your eye on the prize and before you know we will be having a few beers laughing about this.” The boss proceeds with the plan. The boss and Sergei arrive outside the gate to the missile base the guards open the gate and the boss parks the truck inside , then Sergei opens fire and all hell Brecks lose the boss must get to the gate controls to open the gate. Once the gate is open the rest of the crew comes flying in (in cars) gat leading the charge (in classic Johnny gat style). The crew starts to fight off the morning star, gat yells out to the boss “get the door open, we will take care of these A**holes” the boss and Sergei fight their way to main door. Once at the main door the boss enters the code to open the door. The door begins to open and the boss yells out to Gat to come on up the door is open. Sergei and the boss head on in ahead of the rest of the crew. Then as they enter the door seals behind them separating them from the rest of the crew. then sleeping gas goes off knocking out the boss and Sergei. The crew outside tries to open the door again but it has been manually locked from the inside. Gat tries to call pierce (who is currently underground) to tell Peirce that he has to open the door from the inside. The call is full of static and Gat is unsure if Peirce has heard anything. (Cut scene)Sergei and the boss wake up drossy and handcuffed to a fence in a control room. The leader of the morning star walks in and introduces himself casually. He then goes on to say “you have caused a lot of problems for me and my associates. I must admit that you were a worthy opponent, I have been all over the world fighting everything from criminal organizations to foreign armies and you have put up the best fight I have encountered yet. It’s a damn shame there are not more people like you and me in the world, the whole world is getting softer every day, but at least there are still warriors like you and me. The boss says “look can speed this **** up I want to go to freckle bitches before they close”. The leader of the morning star gives the boss a funny look and says “I think you have more pressing concerns to deal with. I don’t understand these Americans they all the money in the world and yet they insist on eating garbage”. One of his thugs says “well you can get the twinz meal for about five dollars, I think it’s a good deal”. The leader of the morning star glares at him and tells the thug to shut up. The leader of the morning star goes on to say “ you two can relax for now I don’t plan on killing you two yet, I just need you to help me with something” the boss remains silent and looks like he is not paying attention. The leader pulls out a phone and says “I need you to call your friends and explain the predicament you are in, and explain that I will free you if you go back to Stillwater and leave (New city) and we can all just pretend this never happened (the leader plans on killing the two anyway).the boss says “what happen to this worrier code bulls***t, if you are a warrior why have you not killed me yet”? the leader responds “I am a warrer because I can control myself, I only kill when something gets in the way or someone has no use for me, luckily you still have some use for me”. The boss chuckles and says “it seems like Loren taught you well, it’s too bad you did not learn from him that this type of S**t does not work with the Saints.” The leader glares at the boss for bringing up Loren, and replies “Loren is dead because he was a banker who thought he could weasel his way out of anything and allowed his ego to cloud his judgment, don’t worry I always cross my t’s and dot my I’s when taking care of my business. But hopefully there will be no business for me to take care of today all you have to do is walk away”. The boss and Sergei remain silent. The leader of the morning star looks at Sergei and says “you look familiar, have we met before?” Sergei says “yes, I think I had sex with your mother a few times”. The leader of the morning star says “your name is Sergei right, (he makes a jester to a thug outside the room to bring something in) because you see I met a women who is looking for you. One of his thugs brings blonde women with a gun pointed at her. Sergei’s eyes explode wide open and he yells out “Lilya!, you F**king bastards let her go she has nothing to do with you”. The boss then has a flashback to when Sergei got the letter from a women earlier in the story, the boss recognizes the women from the photo and connects all the dots to realize that Sergei has or once had a serious relationship with this women. The boss says “you piece of S**t, let her go and fight me like a man you prick!” the leader says “take away that whore I will deal with her later. (He turns his attention back to the boss) and says “just make the call, you can go back to selling your energy drinks and TV shows. Or you can continue to piss me off and get people killed in the process, the ball is in your court”. The boss says “eat my S**t”. the leader responds “that s rather disappointing”. Then gunshots are head outside the room, the leader is rushed out the back with some of his body guards. Peirce, Gat, Shaundi and viola come rushing through the door guns blazing and kill the two thugs still in the room. Gat and Shaundi go over and free Sergei and the boss. The boss thanks Gat and Shaundi, Peirce then says “what about me I crawled 120 yards through human waste to get the door open so Gat and Shaundi can get in”. The boss says “not now Peirce they got Sergei’s girl we got to get that prick.” Viola turns to Sergei and says “you have girl?” Sergei just sits there silently staring forward (Viola then puts it all together in her mind). Gunfire breaks out from the tunnel the crew just came from, Gat tells the boss to go after the leader he and the rest of the crew will take care of the incoming morning star. Sergei finally snaps out of his state of shock and picks up a rifle from one of the dead thugs and follows boss deeper into the missile base. The missile base was abandoned 30 years ago and looks like it has not been touched until recently, there is some construction equipment (due to the renovation efforts of the morning star), there are a few vaults that it appears the morning star are trying to crack open. The boss and Sergei fight their way to the other side of the base into the missile silo (which is empty). When the boss and Sergei enter the silo they look across the silo to a maintenance elevator with the leader pointing a gun to Lilya’s Head, then the elevator goes up. Sergei and the boss have to wait for the elevator to get back down while fighting off some of the morning star. Once they take the elevator up the boss can see in the distance the leader’s limo driving away, Sergei steals an expensive car parked nearby and Sergei and the boss chase after the limo, the boss calls kinzzie while Sergei drives, the boss asks kinzzie where could the leader be headed. Kinzzie takes a moment to look through some stuff on her computer and says “that’s odd, there seems to be a plane at the airport that’s not on the flight schedule, give me a second ……..whoa, I am looking at it through the security camera at the airport, this has to be the largest plane I have ever seen…..I have never seen anything like it.” The boss says “he’s go there I know it, thanks kinzzie”.the boss tells Sergei to get to the airport as fast as he can. The boss must protect the car form incoming morning star until Sergei drives to the airport. Once Sergei breaks through the airport gate the boss and Sergei gaze in amazement of the plane (it’s like a Beriev Be-2500, except it is fitted for land (it’s the largest airplane ever proposed by mankind look it up on Google)). The plane is positioned for takeoff and starts to proceed down the run way. Sergei attempts to chase it down with the car, he pulls the car up next to the landing gear the boss jumps onto the landing gear as the plane begins to pull up. Before the boss jumps Sergei yells to boss telling him to bring back Lilya. The boss holds on to the landing gear as it is retracted to the plane, the boss is now inside the plane. The boss finds a maintenance door to the cargo part of the plane and climbs up into the cargo hold. The boss then attempts to call kinzzie, he tells kinzzie that he is on the plane and asks what should he do (the call has some static), kinzzie says that she will notify the rest of the crew and says that she is unfamiliar with that plane but she suggests that taking out main electric system should force it down relatively safely. The plane is huge and has two levels the boss is on the lower level with the cargo. The area is heavily guarded by heavily armed security personal (most of them don’t seem to be morning star). The cargo contains expensive sports cars, crates of weapons, explosives foreign currencies, and there are even two Tanks (which seam foreign). The boss fights his was the other end of the plane to another maintenance hole and goes into it to disrupt the electrical system, the lights flash and then the emergency lights go on, the boss climbs out and then fights his way up to the passenger area of the plane, once the boss is up he hears roaring from outside the plane, the boss looks outside the plane to see a STAG fighter the boss then gets a call, its Gat “you didn’t think you were going to have all the fun without me”(Gat is flying the STAG fighter) the boss is pleasantly surprised and says “I am glad you decided to join the party but do you got a plan” Gat says “no but Sergei dose”. Then Sergei appears in another STAG fighter on the other side of the plane, Sergei then calls the boss and says “me and Gat are going to try to force the plane to turn around, please save Lilya” the boss says “I will get her back Sergei, just help me out here”. The boss fights his way towards the main compartment, the boss finally gets to the main lodging area where the leader of the morning star is holding Lilya as a human shield(the leader has taken off his suit jacketed and put body armor over it). The leader says “congratulations, you have accomplished nothing, I still control the situation because you know why because you are soft after all and you let personal feelings get in the way, so what is it going to be”?. Sergei is flying very close to the plane, so close that he can see what is going on and see’s Lilya being held. The boss see’s Sergei and they make eye contact. Sergei thinks fast and decides to take out one of the plane’s engines. Sergei fires a missile hitting one of the engines. Inside the plane, the plane shakes heavily and the lights black out for 3 seconds, the boss takes his chance and tackles the leader. A struggle ensues and Lilya runs to safety, the leader kicks the boss off of him sending him across the room(then the boss fight begins, the fights requires the boss to shoot the leader anywhere but the chest until he loses his composure, if the boss gets to close the leader will perform a melee move sending the boss across the room, one the leader is down the boss must run up and preform a melee move of his own (similar to taking down a brute in SR3). After the final melee the boss and the leader struggle in a fight and the leader’s gun go’s off into the cockpit and kills the pilot and destroys some sensitive equipment, the plane starts to go down, the boss immediately turns his attention from the leader to saving Lilya, the leader is beaten up and disoriented and the boss assumes that he will die when the plane crashes. The boss must lead Lilya to the cargo door at the rear of the plane while fight some scattered morning star and heavily armed security, all of this must be done in a limited amount of time the plane is at a downward angle so the boss has to run at an upwards angle. The boss gets to the door and opens it and the plane starts to explode and containers and parts of the plane start to come off, the boss jumps out with Lilya, just as they jump out, Sergei in his STAG fighter gets his fighter underneath the two (in vertical mode) and Lilya and the boss land on the fighter but are hanging on to the wing, Lilya is screaming and freaking out, Sergei opens the pilot canapé and unbuckles the seatbelt, he gets up and reaches out for Lilya and helps her climb into the co-pilot seat, Sergei turns back to try to help the boss but a falling crate(from the plane ) hits the Fighter knocking off the boss and separating him from his parachute. The boss is now in free fall, he must avoid other falling debris while trying to find his parachute, after avoiding the debris and finally catching the parachute he quickly puts it on and activates it. The boss lands near the plane wreckage, the plane has crashed in the middle of nowhere in the dessert (or marsh). The boss walks over to investigate the crash. He walks over sees a pile of shrapnel moving and the leader emerges from the pile. His clothes are torn up and he is bleeding from his mouth and head, he has a nasty gash on the left side of his face and some burns on his arms. The leader says in a raspy voice “you didn’t think I would go down that easy.” And then pulls out a submachine gun and starts to shoot at the boss. The boss must defeat the leader in a shootout within the plane wreck, its one on one, the fight is not too difficult and all that is required is to shoot him anywhere and when his health is zero he is defeated. (cut scene) the boss shoots the leader 4 times in the chest and the leader falls to the ground, the boss takes a moment to look at the body and the wreckage around him, then shaundi, Peirce and viola show up in a criminal(a SUT) and get out. Shaundi and Peirce are arguing about the directions, shaundi says to Peirce “I told you it was a left turn” Peirce responds “how the hell was I supposed to know, that road isn’t even on the map.” Then Gat and Sergei show up in the STAG fighters they had stolen and land nearby. Gat lands first and gets out and meets up with the boss, Sergei then lands his plane and gets out with Lilya, as Lilya and Sergei make their way over to the rest of the crew Peirce goes into the back of the criminal and gets a few bears and hands them out to everyone. The boss and Shaundi sit on the bumper while Gat, Peirce and Viola stand next to them. Sergei and Lilya walk up to the crew and looks around at the wreckage and see’s the body of the leader. Then Sergei asks “is it over?” the boss says “I think its pretty safe to put this one in the books”. Then Sergei turns his attention to Lilya, Lilya thanks the boss and the saints for saving her, then she jumps into Sergei’s arms and says to Sergei(in a flirting tone) “I think we have a lot of catching up to do”. Sergei says “yes we do” Lilya responds “do I get to I get to ride the pony like old times”? Peirce shrieks and starts to chug his beer. Sergei and Lilya then embrace. Gat has a blank look on his face and looks like he is thinking deep (he is thinking about Aishia).The boss then turns to shaundi and says “you ever think about settling down”? Shaundi replies “F**k no, I am having too much fun today to think about tomorrow”. Gat smiles and raises his beer and says “I will drink to that”. The rest of the crew raises their beer’s. The boss then asks Sergei “so what are you going to do now”? Sergei says “me and Lilya will decide that latter but right now we just needs some time alone” shaundi says “aww Sergei you’re not staying “? Sergei chuckles and says “I will be around”. Sergei and lilya walk over to the STAG fighter, Sergei helps her up. Sergei looks back to the boss and nodes at the boss jesting his thanks, the boss raises his beer to jester Sergei in return. Sergei and Lilya take off and head back to the city. The boss turns his attention back to the wreck and his crew. The boss says to Peirce “say Peirce what did take you so long to get out here”? (The boss is attempting to stir things up between Peirce and shaundi for his amusement). Peirce says “shaundi was using an outdated map on her phone” shaundi responds angrily “and I told you to take the left turn anyway, but no you wanted to follow the map”. (Then the argument Brecks out) and the boss and Gat chuckle to themselves. The camera zooms out to show the crew and the plane wreckage.
(Joan Jett-Bad Reputation plays during the credits)
The first part of the credits shows the in game charter and their voice actor in a photo side by side.
About 1/3 of the way through the credits the credit pause and goes to a full cut scene. The crew is still sitting around the plane wreckage all quit and the boss says “hey do you feel like we are forgetting something”? Viola says “yeah I just can put my finger on it”. Gat says “I don’t know what you are talking about”. Then the cut scene goes back to the HQ. it shows the basement door that Donnie was kept in broken and then the camera pans to the backyard. To show Donnie running across the backyard. Then a huge crate falls from the sky (from the plane the boss just brought down). Donnie goes over to investigate he opens the crate to discover a sports car and finds two million dollars in the trunk. Donnie face lightens up and starts to laugh and celebrate. After celebrating he gets into the car and drives away. (The cut scene goes back to the crew) the boss is still thinking and then says “I think I might have left the TV on” he then shrugs his shoulders and continues to drink his beer.
(Back to the credits)
Next song during credits ( Chumbawamba–Tubthumping)
Then after the credits there is another cut scene. It shows the leader of the morning star walking down the road in the middle of the dessert. He is starting strait forward with his head slightly tilted down, he is still very messed up. A pickup truck drives by and stops. The driver gets out and says to the leader “holy S***t buddy are you ok?” the driver notices the leader has been shot and also sees his gash and burns. The leader stops and stands for a moment, the camera go’s to the fornt of him and zooms into his face. The leader looks up into the camera with a sadistic smile on his face.(endscene)
When the credits are over the games goes back to the HQ the boss wakes up from his bed and then gets a phone call from shaundi, she says “hey boss we have a surprise for you, met me outside and I will drive you there.” The boss goes outside and meets up with Shaundi. Shaundi is in a very upbeat and in a happy mood, she says “come on you’re going to be late” the boss says “Late? For what?” shaundi says “you will see now let’s go”. she pulls the boss to her car by the arm. (Fast-forward) shaundi arrives and tells the boss to cover his eyes, the boss gives her a stupid look and says “are you serious?” shaundi says “please boss, can you amuse me for a bit longer” the boss says “fine”. And he reluctantly covers his eyes. Shaundi guides him around the corner of the street and says “ok you can look now”. The boss looks and is delighted by what he sees. The casino you took over earlier in the story (and was being repaired and renovated) is now finished and it is a Saints themed casino (hell it’s not even a casino, it’s a resort, it’s huge). The rest of the crew is standing out front and yells “surprise!” there is also a media gathering behind the red ropes. The boss walks up to the crew and thanks them, and then Peirce says “no thank you, if it weren’t for you I would still be some no name from Stillwater”. Gat says “if it weren’t for you I would be on death row”. Shaundi says “if it weren’t for your boss I probably would have lost my mind by now”(referring to her drug abuse earlier in the story).viola says “and if it weren’t for you boss I probably would……you know what now that I think about, you kind of F**ked me over. (if it weren’t for boss she would still be working for Loren and her twin sister Kiki would probably still be alive) “but I guess its ok I still kind of like you”. Viola then invites the boss inside to take a look around before the grand opening, the crew follows around the boss and looks around in amazement, the place is huge, there are blackjack tables, poker tables, slot machines, there is a strip club, a planet saints, a liquor store and a buffet. There are statues and banners of the saint’s characters, There is also a penthouse on the top floor for the boss. The boss and the crew walk back outside, Gat says to the boss “you have done a lot in keeping this gang together, I hope you like our gift” the boss says “well I have had some great lieutenant to help me out along the way”. Viola then hands the boss a big pair of scissors and then as the crew stands in the background the boss cuts the red tape then the camera’s start to flash.
Ok i am going to post some left over material for some of the other people on these forums writing their own stories about what they feel SR4 should be, i figured it would be a waste to never share it with the world.
but as for right now i have a few questions for the readers
-what should i name the city?
(i have decided to go with a city similar to Las Vegas/Dallas located in the American southwest)
-i personally felt that the story lost some steam during the middle part, if anyone has any ideas for missions let me know
- i need a name for the leader of the morning star, remember he is from Switzerland (and please don’t be to stereotypical, i am not naming him Hanes)
-also need a name for the motorcycle gang and the cartel and names for their leaders.
Holy **** that was epic! Though I personally would've had you kill the Morning Star leader first and then fight Dex.
City name:Stalwart(very fitting name if you look up the definition)
For the middle part, i'd have Kazou Akuji turn up alive and allied with The Morning Star, and you have to defeat him in a sword fight.
I'd call the motorcycle gang the Devil Drivers or the Speed Demons.
Morning Star leader:Franz Ahlstead
I'd name the Cartel "La Guarda"
thanks for the feedback, i think i am going to send in my story after the release of the trouble with the clones DLC (to make sure there is no earth shattering events). i guess the only thing left to do is to pass on my ideas and concepts directly to the people who can do something with them.
i like your idea for a name for the city it dose fit, but i was thinking something a bit more southwestern sounding, maybe San Stalwart or Las Stalwart.
i also love your idea for a name for the cartel, i probably will put it in immediately.
i am going to consider the rest of your idea's too, i plan to run them by a few people i know and i will see what i come up with.
You expect me to read this text with no paragraphs
On this, the day of my daughter's wedding?
i copy and paste the text into word and make the font bigger, its easy to read then. i apoligize for not having paragraphs i just copy and paste from word.
